Black Mask
Black Mask
There’s a city set against a setting sun
The outline of the skyscrapers fades as the city lights flick on
As the sun sinks behind the buildings
I wake up
I’m not a night creature by nature
It’s just my favourite pleasure to use the night as my sparring ground
Although I’m not your enemy tonight
I’ll meet you
I wear a black mask over my eyes
It’s added adventure for me to keep my face a secret until the last second
I haven’t met you formally
So I’ll wait
You’re the sort of woman I’ve seen
Hang upside down in your loft just to let the blood rush to your head
Pop pink bubblegum at strangers
You tease me
Maybe it’s your playful eyes
Or the way you walk when you know everyone is watching you
It’s your style that draws me to you
You’re too good
I’m the kind of guy you follow
Because I caught your arm when you tripped coming out of the tunnels
You saw my black mask and couldn’t resist
Our eyes met
Chasing me all the way to the pit
It’s smoky and the air is filled with something to let you know it was a mistake
Coming here and watching me fight
You were interested
Your eyes were wide as you warned me
You didn’t think I stood a chance against the giant guy who stood opposite me
I was too slender, my hands too white
I’ll show you
His blood splattered into the third row
But that was only the beginning for me since I’m not even warm yet
You don’t know how tough I am
You’ll see it
By the fourth brawl I’m ready to go
I thought you would have run home or passed out on the floor by now
But you relaxed and you cheered for me
I heard you
I’ve got a cut above my eyebrow
I ignore the sting and the pain in my jaw and asked you if I could take you home
Still, I wear the black mask
It’s my name
My wet hair falls over the material
You’re exceptionally conversational as we leave and head out the back doors
I was wrong about you
You had fun
I think only that you’re beautiful
And how I want to blow your mind apart with the exact colour of my eyes
I haven’t decided that path yet
Will you wait?
I’ll watch you tonight
You’re the type of woman who eats ice cream directly from the tub
Who sits on the countertop and talks about me
And how I kissed you
4 Comments:
Hey! Very nice poetry! :) And from a guy's point of view! I usually don't write anything in the guy's POV. I guess I feel very inspired to express a woman's feelings.
Problems with your latest piece of writing? Mark of a Goddess? If you want to I can help you out or something.
I now have a blog (makemyowndestiny). I used to have a photoblog but then ran out of space. It was pretty cool there. Now I just thought of having a blog with my thoughts (especially since lately I haven't felt very inspired to take photos. when I had my photoblog I used to take lots of amazing photos). Go and take a look you you'd like. ;)
By algelic, at 3:41 p.m.
Yep, you might not know it from DM and MW, but I usually write from a guy's perspective. I really like trying to figure out what they think, and how they think and basic stuff like that.
My writing problem was with a single paragraph in MW. I thought I was done with it, but I decided to go over Heart of The Dragon one more time to make sure it was perfect, and then I proceeded to bang my head against the wall about it until one of my buddies came and saved me. Thanks for the offer to help, and I'll definitely hunt you up if things get out of control, but I got the paragraph right today! YAY!
I just have to say that the pic you chose for your avatar is incredible - wow!
By Sapphirefly, at 6:40 p.m.
I thought the poem was very imaginative. :)
By Anonymous, at 3:31 p.m.
Thanks!!
By Sapphirefly, at 6:17 p.m.
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